35484393-WT-2+Corregidas

Preview:

DESCRIPTION

fs

Citation preview

  • Writing Task 2: LETTER OF ADVICE

    Alumno Entregada y corregida?

    21. Mara Dolores Martn Palma SI

    22. Azaroa de los Reyes Hidalgo SI

    23. Raquel Domnguez Domnguez SI

    24. Mara Estbaliz Njera Lpez de Luzuriaga NO entrega

    25. Ignacio Zanza Ruiz de Angulo SI

    26. Mara Gemma Fernndez Rodrguez NO entrega

    27. Mara Blzquez Barquilla NO entrega

    28. Esther Martorell Castillo SI

    29. Alberto Surez Prez NO entrega

    30. Nuria Martnez Gmez NO entrega

    31. Mara Pilar Olmos Martn NO entrega

    32. Francisco Jos Andrades Molina NO entrega

    33. Jos Antonio Fernndez Carreo NO entrega

    34. Francisca Snchez Hinojosa NO entrega

    35. Mara de Gracia Colazo Bolaos NO entrega

    36. Lourdes Peguero Cabeza NO entrega

    37. Mnica Mariscal Contreras NO entrega

    38. Mara Teresa Martn Cuadrado SI

    39. Cristina Garca Garca NO entrega

    40. Juan Jos Mirn Molina NO entrega

    Entregadas correctamente y corregidas: 6

    Entregas incorrectas: 0

    Sin entregar: 14

  • Dearreader,:Dontbesad,youhavetobeastrongperson.Practicesomeactivitiesinordertomeetnewfriends.Playsomesport,ithelpswillhelpyou(to)fellfeelbetter.Thinkaboutyourchildren,theyhavetobehappy.Gotodancedancingwithyournewfriends.Haveagoodtimeandforgettoaboutyourhusband.Talkwithotherpersonpeopleaboutyourworries,theycan(willbeableto)helpyou.Spendsometimewhitwithyourfamily,theyalwaysarewithyou.Andthemostimportantofitallisthatyouhavetoloveyouyourself.Yourssincerely

    Writing Task 2 LETTER OF ADVICE Pgina 1 de 6

  • Dear reader,

    On the one hand, you mustnt think that you are alone, because you have your young children.

    They are the most important elements in your life, and they need you are fine to care for them.

    On the other hand, I think it is more difficult to cope with loneliness and personal

    problems without any [outside] help. Perhaps, if you could move/live nearer your family,

    rebuilding your live life would be easier. Your Relatives usually will encourage you to cope more

    quickly provide the necessary support and encouragement to help you on this

    path/journey/quest.

    You must also, go out with friends, and meet different people; for example you can try to meet

    people on the Internet (. I think it) which is a good idea for people/those who dont have enough

    time. [avoid using "people", again]

    I hope my advices can help you) is helpful. You must have patience and, (probably) you will feel

    better next months as time goes by.

    Good mood Best wishes and good luck!

    Writing Task 2 LETTER OF ADVICE Pgina 2 de 6

  • Dear friend:,

    In the first place, I think its so important that you dont feel alone, because you have

    two wonderful children, and they need your fortitude /strength and affection. Your

    children and you can do a lot of fun activities in family together: going to the park,

    seeing a cartoons film cartoons films, playing... The most important thing is that you are

    together.

    Also In addition/Besides, you have a family and friends, why dont you go out whit

    with them? Lets Try making a list about places that you want to visit, or things that you

    want to do. Doing things or traveling whit with dear people it is comforting and special.

    One other Another suggestion is trying to meet new people. Maybe it is a good idea you

    to get to know other characters ways of living, other thoughts, other cultures... and be

    more positive whit with yourself.

    We have only one life, so we must do as much as possible to be happy. With patient patience

    and affection you feel much better in time. youll feel much better as time goes by.

    Good look luck and cheer up!

    Writing Task 2 LETTER OF ADVICE Pgina 3 de 6

  • DearReader,Firstofalltrytokeepcalm,it'sadifficultsituationforyou,butcertainlyyouwillcope.Themostimportantofallisthehappinessofyourchildren,sothinkaboutthepossibilityofmovemovingtoanothercitywhereyouhaveanyfamiliarrelativesorfriends.InyoufreetimeYoucanmakefunnythingsinyourfreetime,likeplayingwithyourchildrenorvisitinginterestingplaces.Finallydon'tforgettohaveahealthylifestylebecauseit'sveryimportanttofeelhappyandmaybeyoucanfindanewcouplepartner.Bestregards,AgonyAunt

    Writing Task 2 LETTER OF ADVICE Pgina 4 de 6

  • MarinaQuevedoc\Catedraln3

    BarcelonaDearreader,IreadaboutyourproblemandIamgoingtotrytohelpyougivingyousomeadvicesadvicelikeafriend.Firstofall, Iwant to tellyou thatyouwillneverbealone.Youhaveyourchildrenand theyneedyou,soyoumustcheerup.I thinkyoucould try to take twoweeksofholidaysa twoweekholiday.Meanwhileyoucanvisityourfamilyandstaywiththem.Inthatperiodoftime,thinkaboutallyouwanttodo inyournewlifeandputinorderyourideasinorder.AnotheradvicethatIwanttogiveyouisthatyoushouldtrytofindoutfriendsinyourcitybythroughsocialnetworksandyoumeetwiththemtododifferentactivities.Ihopeyoufeelbetterafterreadingmyresponseand ifyouneedmorehelp,youwilldonothesitatetocontactwithmeagain.SincerelyAgonyAunt

    Writing Task 2 LETTER OF ADVICE Pgina 5 de 6

  • MaraBlanco.C/SolN1Madrid.10/12/2013.

    Dearreader,IjustgetgotyourletterandIwasreallysorryaboutyourproblem.

    Imhappytogiveyousomeadviceabouthowdontfeelnotfeelingalone.First,Isuggestmakingalistofthethingsyoulikeanddontlike,andin

    thesamewayaskyourself,whatkindofpeoplewouldIliketomeet?Inmyopinion,itwouldbegoodtodosomeactivitylikegoingtothegymordancing,whereyoucouldmeetsomeinterestingpeople. Anotheropcionoptionarethesocialnetworks,throughthemyoucankeepintouchwithyourfamilyandevenmightfindsomechildhoodfriends. Ontheotherhand,whydonttdontyoulearnhowtospendtimewithyourselfandyourschildreninapositiveways?Ithinkyoucouldenjoythatalotwiththem.Ihopethiswashelpful.Ifyouwantmoreadvice,justletmeknow.Sincerely.Agonyaunt.

    Writing Task 2 LETTER OF ADVICE Pgina 6 de 6